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Esther Sylvester

  • Scripts Re: Eradication (Scene Two)

    Hey V, it's Esther! Remember me? If not, think "Chat". This was great. You actually got my heart rate up a bit. You have a great talent for suspense and ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: Crying while writing.... <.< >.>

    Yes! It happens to me all the time. I make myself laugh too, which is weird because most of the time the jokes my characters make aren't even funny. I ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Keebler the Bounty Hunter. (Contest entry)

    AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is a contest entry for ultraviolet's writing contest. The rules were to include a line and a prop of her choice into a script or a short ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Prophecy (Chapter one)

    Hi! I'm here to review your piece! Goodjob. You left the reader with a cliffhanger that makes us want to read more. I liked this piece, but there are some ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Warriors: Friends in Need

    Hi Stori! I have never read the Warriors series before, but I liked this a lot. I'm generally not one for animal stories, but you pulled this off and it ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: New Story

    You're welcome! I'm glad I could help. Like I said, I love this so far and I do like the voice just like the review above said. You know, after ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: New Story

    Hola Tim! I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. PLOT: Well, well. This is an interesting premise. I certainly like the idea of a guy stuck in ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: ...Hey!

    Welcome! It's nice to have you here at YWS. I'm Esther, nice to meet you. Everyone IS nice and friendly here, and if you need any help just Private Message ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.8

    Author's note: This is the eighth chapter to my romance novel. I wrote it much earlier, but it somehow got deleted. I rewrote it and I think I like it ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prologue

    Hey Lady! Since the reviewer above me did most of the work, this review will be short! STUFF I LIKED: -I like the descriptions. They let the reader know what ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey

    Welcome young writer! It's a pleasure to have you here at YWS. I see that you have been here for a while. How do you like it here so far? ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey There!

    Welcome! I believe we are all a little crazy here at YWS, so nothing to worry about! Wow, two novels? That's impressive! I am hoping to finish my first one ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Legendary Party Chapter 1: A new start (edited)

    Hey Fruit! Mind If I call you that? Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here. I wanted to review you first so I am! Let's review! ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 7

    Thanks guys, I appreciate all of the help! Since now I am back from vacation I should be able to post more now! Thanks again.

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: The American Dream Chapter 1

    Hey there! Esther Sylvester is here to give you a review. Yay, I liked this! I think you really have a knack for descriptions and the like. This was well ...

    Jun 15, 2010


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