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Re: Eradication (Scene Two)
Hey V, it's Esther! Remember me? If not, think "Chat". This was great. You actually got my heart rate up a bit. You have a great talent for suspense and ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Crying while writing.... <.< >.>
Yes! It happens to me all the time. I make myself laugh too, which is weird because most of the time the jokes my characters make aren't even funny. I ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Keebler the Bounty Hunter. (Contest entry)
AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is a contest entry for ultraviolet's writing contest. The rules were to include a line and a prop of her choice into a script or a short ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Prophecy (Chapter one)
Hi! I'm here to review your piece! Goodjob. You left the reader with a cliffhanger that makes us want to read more. I liked this piece, but there are some ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Warriors: Friends in Need
Hi Stori! I have never read the Warriors series before, but I liked this a lot. I'm generally not one for animal stories, but you pulled this off and it ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: New Story
You're welcome! I'm glad I could help. Like I said, I love this so far and I do like the voice just like the review above said. You know, after ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: New Story
Hola Tim! I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. PLOT: Well, well. This is an interesting premise. I certainly like the idea of a guy stuck in ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: ...Hey!
Welcome! It's nice to have you here at YWS. I'm Esther, nice to meet you. Everyone IS nice and friendly here, and if you need any help just Private Message ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.8
Author's note: This is the eighth chapter to my romance novel. I wrote it much earlier, but it somehow got deleted. I rewrote it and I think I like it ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Prologue
Hey Lady! Since the reviewer above me did most of the work, this review will be short! STUFF I LIKED: -I like the descriptions. They let the reader know what ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Hey
Welcome young writer! It's a pleasure to have you here at YWS. I see that you have been here for a while. How do you like it here so far? ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Hey There!
Welcome! I believe we are all a little crazy here at YWS, so nothing to worry about! Wow, two novels? That's impressive! I am hoping to finish my first one ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Legendary Party Chapter 1: A new start (edited)
Hey Fruit! Mind If I call you that? Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here. I wanted to review you first so I am! Let's review! ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 7
Thanks guys, I appreciate all of the help! Since now I am back from vacation I should be able to post more now! Thanks again.
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: The American Dream Chapter 1
Hey there! Esther Sylvester is here to give you a review. Yay, I liked this! I think you really have a knack for descriptions and the like. This was well ...
Jun 15, 2010
